Seeking an easy mark in the crowded school, Diesel pitches a paid afterlife certification to Abby, hoping to monetize her spiritual insecurities. The hallway between third and fourth period is a river of noise—slamming lockers, shouted jokes, squeaking sneakers.
Diesel leans against his locker like he owns the place.
Shoulders loose.
Smile sharp.
Underneath, his self-esteem is about as solid as an empty soda can.
He spots Abby walking past.
Long skirt. Modest top. Small silver cross at her throat. A colorful prayer journal hugged to her chest like a shield.
To Diesel, she looks exactly like what he wants today:
A customer.
“Hey, Abby!” he calls, snapping his locker shut. “Got a minute? I want to recruit you as a client for my new company.”
Abby pauses.
Her fingers tighten on the journal.
She’s sweet, polite—the type who apologizes when other people bump into her. There’s a flicker of worry in her eyes, like she’s never sure what’s safe to question.
“What do I have to do?” she asks.
Diesel’s pulse jumps.
The pitch is the best part.
“Simple,” he says, flashing a confident grin. “You pay me one dollar a week.
“In return, my company officially certifies your afterlife beliefs.”
Abby blinks.
“Certifies?”
“Yeah. You get a certificate with all your next‑world expectations listed,” Diesel explains, hands moving as he talks. “That boosts the chance they actually come true. The longer you pay, the more powerful your beliefs get.
“Think of it like… a spiritual subscription plan.”
Abby’s stomach twists.
Her church has rules. Clear ones. Questioning them feels like poking a live wire.
“I don’t need your company to certify my beliefs,” she says, clinging to what feels safe. “My Savior already gave me a set of beliefs He certified.”
Diesel rolls his eyes inside.
Dictator in the sky. Old rulebook. Same script.
He doesn’t believe anyone’s really running the universe—but he’s more than happy to profit off the idea.
“My company lets you add personal preferences,” he says smoothly. “Like… you could believe everyone goes to Heaven if you want—even criminals. Your Creator upgrades them. Makes them perfect.”
The image hits a raw nerve.
“Eww. I don’t want former wicked criminals hanging around in my special paradise,” Abby blurts.
Diesel shrugs.
“Fine. Then custom‑build it,” he says. “Maybe those people live… further out. Heavenly suburbs.
“You still win. That’s the point.
“You get to choose.
“You can set up anything—like all the animals you’ve ever loved coming back to live with you.
“Or…” He smirks. “Wardrobe rights.”
Abby frowns.
“Wardrobe rights?”
“Yeah. No one’s officially claimed post‑life clothing rules,” Diesel says. “If you don’t lock it in, you might get stuck in the same plain white robe for eternity.”
That lands like a punch.
Abby likes looking nice. She calls it “being a good witness,” but she knows there’s vanity in there too.
An endless plain white outfit claws at her imagination like a nightmare.
“Okay, ouch,” she says. “I believe I’m going to wear a new, pretty dress every day.”
“There you go,” Diesel says. “That’s a solid belief. I can certify it. Make it more likely you get your Dream Closet 2.0.”
He leans in slightly.
“What else?”
Abby’s eyes brighten.
Her fear loosens its grip.
She slides into Heaven‑2.0 mode—the version where God is a soft, smiling grandpa handing out gifts.
“I believe all my friends and family are there,” she says, voice earnest. “Even if they didn’t… fully believe here. I can’t imagine paradise without them.
“My faith should count for at least five tickets. My parents, siblings, plus pets.”
Diesel nods, hearing exactly what he expected:
A wide‑open market.
Unlimited add‑ons.
“That’s a righteous belief,” he says. “Bring me a list tomorrow. Every personal preference you want.
“I’ll put together a certified package.”
Abby feels a jittery excitement.
She’s never actually used her imagination like this. She’s always handed everything to her Savior to decide.
“This is… kind of fun,” she admits. “I’ve imagined bits of Heaven before, but never, like, designed it. Or turned it into an actual belief. There’s so much to think about.”
Diesel watches her walk away, already calculating.
If he sells Heaven 2.0 to one girl, he can sell it to a thousand.
“Get together with your friends,” he calls. “Group belief is powerful. Science says groupthink shapes the future.”
She doesn’t catch the edge in his voice.
But down the hall, Evan does.
And he doesn’t like what he sees.
Standing by the drinking fountain, Evan confronts Diesel about the afterlife scam, refusing to buy into the illusion. When Abby disappears around the corner, Diesel’s grin widens.
He does quick math in his head.
One dollar a week. Fifty‑two weeks in a year. Multiply by twenty clients… fifty… a hundred…
He glances up.
Evan stands by the drinking fountain, backpack slung over one shoulder, watching with calm, sharp eyes.
Evan is everything Diesel isn’t:
Grounded.
Serious.
Old‑soul quiet.
He doesn’t chase shortcuts. He studies them.
“You heard all that?” Diesel asks, forcing a lazy smirk.
“Enough,” Evan says.
He takes a sip of water, then straightens.
“It sounds like a scam,” he says. No sugar‑coating. “Why would I pay you to give me permission to believe something?”
A muscle jumps in Diesel’s jaw.
He lifts his chin, rebuilding his fake confidence.
“You call it a scam. I call it an investment,” he says. “Beliefs are powerful. Certification adds structure, accountability, group synergy—”
“So you’re selling structure now?” Evan asks.
Diesel ignores that.
“It’s a dollar a week,” he says. “You blow more than that on vending machines. Teens pay for worse.
“I’m offering actual value.
“Certification. Tracking. A system.
“Since you’d be my first client, I’ll lock you in at that rate—founder’s discount.
“Just… don’t tell anyone.”
Evan exhales slowly.
He feels the subtle pressure—Diesel’s hunger for validation, for control, for something to plug the hole in his chest.
He also feels something behind Diesel.
A familiar fingerprint.
Tempter talk.
“You can trust,” Evan says at last, tone dry, “that if I invested in your business, I wouldn’t tell anyone.”
For a second, Diesel can’t tell if that’s a yes or a no.
Then he catches the look in Evan’s eyes.
Steel.
And he realizes:
It’s never.
As the student body gathers for a special presentation, Diesel presents Afterlife Options to the school assembly, offering to validate any custom belief. The auditorium buzzes.
Metal chairs scrape.
Whispers ricochet off the walls.
The whole school is crammed in, waiting for a mysterious “special presentation.”
Diesel stands in the wings, staring at the sea of students.
His heart hammers.
This is it.
His shot.
His shortcut.
The Principal steps to the podium, taps the mic.
“Students,” he says, voice echoing, “today we’re featuring one of our outstanding students, who has started a…”
He squints at the card.
“…revolutionary new company.”
He clears his throat.
“Please give your attention to Diesel.”
Scattered claps.
A few laughs.
Diesel walks into the spotlight.
It feels good.
He lets the attention pour into his emptiness.
“My company,” he announces, “is called Afterlife Options.”
A ripple of curiosity moves through the room.
“Here’s what I do,” Diesel says. “I help you custom‑design your afterlife.
“Completely free to plan.
“Then—for just one dollar a week—I certify your afterlife belief package. Officially.
“Professionally.”
Some kids snicker.
Others lean forward.
“Your list,” Diesel says, “can include whatever you want your next life to look like.
“Mansion in the clouds.
Forest cottage.
“Space castle.
“Eternal concert.
“You use your free will to imagine it—and my company stamps it and backs it.
“As long as your beliefs are certified by a qualified pro, you can expect your post‑life vacation to match your custom order.”
He paces slowly, milking the silence.
“Every contract comes with a printed certificate and a unique ID number,” he adds. “Proof you own that belief set. Nobody else can claim your exact scenario.
“Premium plans have even more perks.”
A freshman in the front row raises a shaking hand.
“Um,” he says, “I’m just a teenager. I barely know what college I want. How am I supposed to design my entire… afterlife?”
From near the side aisle, Evelyn watches.
No cross. No stickers. No badge of belief.
But her aura feels steady and bright. Her inner senses are buzzing like a smoke alarm.
She sees what Diesel is doing:
Hooking young souls to fantasies without foundations.
“How did you get qualified?” she calls, voice clear.
Diesel smiles bigger.
He loves this question.
“This company is unique,” he says. “I’m the first one to think of formal afterlife certification.
“First to market means I own the idea.
“So yeah—I’m the only one allowed to distribute these certificates.”
He leans closer to the mic.
“And I made a deal,” he adds, lowering his voice dramatically, “with the Temp—” he catches himself—“with the Creator to honor all certified belief sets.
“Your Truth is what matters.
“Not some rigid, old-school version.”
Nervous laughter ripples.
“Here’s the secret no one tells you,” Diesel says. “What happens after you die depends on what you pre‑create now.
“Your beliefs are blueprints.
“Free will is your tool.
“Right now, while you’re alive, is when you get to draft the design—down to the weird stuff. The pervy stuff.
“The fun stuff.
“The stuff you’d never admit in church.”
Some kids grin.
Others look sick.
Evelyn’s eyes harden.
She recognizes the real author behind this “deal.”
And it is not the Creator.
While listening to the pitch, Rev and Evan question the power of custom afterlife beliefs and the danger of replacing cosmic law with popular consensus. Rev sits halfway back, arms crossed, eyes half‑lidded.
Diesel’s pitch washes over him like a software patch note.
New system.
New settings.
Possible exploit.
“Why can’t I just wait until I get to Heaven to set things up?” Rev calls out, voice smooth. “Why plan my ‘paradise’ now?”
Diesel starts pacing again.
“Because Heaven,” he says, “is the Creator’s turf.
“His Truth.
“His rules.
“Once you’re there, free will is over.
“You lose editing permissions.
“If you don’t set your expectations now, you might get stuck in someone else’s idea of paradise.”
He smirks.
“Maybe as a singing lawn statue forever.
“You want to risk that?”
Snickers.
Evan’s jaw clenches.
He stands.
“Human free will can’t override actual Truth,” he says. “Cosmic law doesn’t change because you wish hard enough. That’s not creativity.
“That’s delusion.”
Diesel waves him off.
“Truth changes,” he says. “What’s true now doesn’t have to be true forever. Eternity is a long time.
“Anything’s possible if you believe long enough and hard enough.
“And if you start young—” he grins—“even better.”
Abby’s heart bangs against her ribs.
“Money again,” she blurts. “Expectations again. What if you help me plan a list,” she asks, “but I don’t pay to certify it?”
“Not smart,” Diesel says. “Then you’re betting on just your own belief power.
“With Afterlife Options, you get the boost from tons of other clients who believe in the company and each other.
“It’s like spiritual crowdfunding.
“Our group belief multiplies your odds.”
“Is that true,” Abby presses, “or did you just make that up so I’ll pay?”
Diesel shrugs.
“Look at fandoms,” he says. “Cons. Cosplay. People dress up and step into shared fantasy. It feels real because everyone agrees it is—for a while.
“That’s group belief.
“Way more powerful than you pretending alone.
“Democracy works the same way: the many beat the one.”
Evan stares at him.
He hears the Tempter speaking through Diesel’s mouth.
“Might doesn’t make right,” Evan says. “You’re letting something dark use you.”
Diesel doesn’t flinch.
He knows whose side he thinks he’s on.
And he doesn’t care about the fine print.
In the chaotic aftermath of the assembly, Diesel explains subscription tiers for upgrading personal truth to students eager for an easy path. After the assembly, the hallway explodes.
Everyone talks at once.
Diesel hangs near the stage doors, clipboard in hand, energy humming.
Rev corners him first.
“So,” Rev says, voice calm, “what if I quit paying?”
Diesel smiles thinly.
“That’s in the fine print,” he says. “If you stop paying, your certified beliefs lose their extra creative power. They’re just regular beliefs again.
“No boost.
“If you don’t have that boost, you risk getting stuck with some random default afterlife.
“Somebody else’s itinerary.
“No edits. No take‑backs.”
Rev hates recurring commitments.
“Can I do a one‑time payment?” he asks. “Pay once, lock it in forever?”
“People change,” Diesel says smoothly. “Beliefs change.
“My weekly model lets you add, delete, or upgrade at any time.
“Old plans get stale.
“Youth today don’t even know what they believe. They feel things.
“I give that chaos a framework.”
He smirks.
“Some think they’ll get eaten by aliens. Others want to reincarnate as owls or eagles because birds don’t wreck the planet.’
“I don’t care if it’s true. I certify it.
“Make it valid.
“Increase the chances it becomes your reality.”
Evan steps closer.
“The Creator’s Truth doesn’t evolve with trends,” he says. “If your whole ‘Truth’ is built on made‑up beliefs, you’re setting yourself up for disappointment and depression.”
Rev brushes that aside.
“Is there a cheaper plan?” he asks Diesel. “Something less… weekly?”
“Group plans,” Diesel says. “One dollar per month. You join a belief group with a fixed master list.
“You don’t get to add your own beliefs.
“You align with the group leader’s Truth.
“One big comfy package.”
Evelyn appears at Evan’s shoulder.
“Do you fact‑check any of this before you certify it?” she asks. “Isn’t it dangerous to validate someone’s delusions?
“If you keep telling someone they can fly, at some point, they’ll jump.”
Diesel shrugs.
“I split the fee with the group leader,” he says. “He handles planning. If he changes the master list, everyone’s package updates.
“More efficient.
“More aligned.
“The bigger the group, the stronger the affirmation power.”
Rev frowns.
“So the leader can just… change reality for everyone?” he says. “Sounds like a dictator with a fan club.”
“The leader still has limits,” Diesel says. “If he pushes too far, people quit and join another group.
“The market controls him.
“Besides, society’s already changing. Beliefs about drugs, music, sex, tattoos, marriage, crime, money—they’ve all shifted.
“Old virtues are outdated. New ones are more flexible.
“More convenient.”
He lowers his voice.
“The one‑world progressive agenda is about diversity, equity, inclusion,” he says. “Old-school virtue clashes with that.
“Defining your own Truth matters more now than any dusty scripture.”
The hallway feels thinner.
Like something is peeling reality open and slotting fantasy in its place.
Intrigued by the business model, Rev considers starting a custom afterlife belief group for teens that would legally bind their Creator to their own rules. Most kids head to lunch.
Rev hangs back.
So do Diesel, Evan, and Evelyn.
The air hums.
“The weekly personal plan gives me more control,” Rev says slowly. “Picking and adjusting my own beliefs. Live updates. Custom environment.”
“Your afterlife isn’t about wishlists,” Evelyn says. “It’s about what you become.
“What you invest. What you heal. What you master.”
“You can’t buy virtue on subscription,” Evan adds.
Diesel smells blood.
“The more premium the plan,” he tells Rev, “the more freedom you get.
“Fully custom list.
Weekly recertification.
“Whatever you want to believe—locked in, updated, empowered.”
Rev’s eyes sharpen.
He’s not just thinking like a customer.
He’s thinking like a leader.
“Could I start my own group?” he asks. “Recruit members. Use my beliefs as the base list. Let people vote once a month on new additions?”
“Would you base it on your beliefs,” Evan cuts in, “or your Creator’s Truth?
“Because if you synced with actual Truth, you wouldn’t need Diesel’s stamp at all.”
Rev shakes his head.
“I think,” he says, “if enough people believe the same thing, we can alter cosmic reality.
“Like rewriting code by sheer input.”
Diesel practically glows.
“Starting your own group has huge advantages,” he says. “As chief believer, you decide what everyone expects in their afterlife.
“That gives your package more weight.
“The more people who share it, the more the Creator has to honor it.
“Free will means your personal Truth binds your Creator.”
He moves closer, voice dropping.
“Earth is a free‑will exclusion zone,” he says. “Here, your beliefs matter.
“In Heaven, they don’t.
“If you crystallize your Truth now, He has to abide by it later.”
Rev nods slowly.
“I could create a teen‑focused list,” he says. “Simple. Few rules. Just enough to hook them.”
Diesel grins.
“Teens are a goldmine,” he says. “Most have no clue what they believe, so they’re anxious and drifting. A simple group program with minimal effort and maximum freedom? Perfect.”
He smiles, shark-bright.
“If they don’t choose beliefs now,” he adds, “they get stuck with whatever their Creator chooses.
“And free will means He has to respect certified beliefs.
“That’s cosmic law.”
Evan feels his skin crawl.
They’re turning spiritual illiteracy into a business model.
And students are lining up.
As the new trend takes over the school, students wear gold stars to prove their afterlife is certified, completely unaware of the mystic damage it causes. A few weeks later, school looks the same.
But something fundamental has shifted.
Half the students wear small gold star stickers dead center on their foreheads.
The other half refuses.
Diesel strides down the hall, clipboard in hand, proud of his new uniform.
“The logo’s a star,” he tells Evan, who walks beside him. “Like wishing upon one.
“Clients get a star sticker—proof their afterlife is certified.”
He gestures at the crowd.
“At first, only a few brave ones wore them,” he says. “Now more than half the school, plus some teachers.
“Some just do it so they won’t be left out.”
Evan watches a nervous freshman press a star to her forehead while her friends cheer.
To them, it’s a trend.
To him, it looks like a brand stamped over the third eye.
“Those stars,” Evan says quietly, “sit right on top of people’s mystic vision center.
“The more they cling to false beliefs, the less they see real Truth.”
Diesel shrugs.
“My clients say they feel free,” he says. “They can do whatever they want and count it as bonus points.
“We’re tracking it.”
“Tracking it?” Evelyn echoes.
“Afterlife points,” Diesel says. “We log their actions. The more points, the higher their luxury tier on the other side.
“Like game levels.
“Start earning early, build credit for the world you’re designing.”
Evan looks at the glittering stars.
He doesn’t see status.
He sees chains.
Sitting across the divided cafeteria, Evan and Evelyn challenge Rev and Abby on easy salvation beliefs that demand no personal virtue or discipline. By mid‑semester, the cafeteria is literally divided.
Starred tables.
Unstarred corners.
Rev sits in the middle of a star‑heavy table, expression blank and thoughtful, like a narrator watching his own show.
“A lot of students are joining my single‑option plan,” he says. “One afterlife choice. Guaranteed.”
Evan sits across from him.
No star.
No certification.
Just stubborn, steady refusal.
“There are at least seven afterlife options,” he says. “Not one.”
Abby drops her tray next to Evan.
She’s in that familiar mode—eyes bright, looking for the next formula that lets her relax without thinking too deeply.
“What beliefs are you certifying?” she asks Rev. “Like… exactly?”
Rev gives a small smile.
“There’s a super‑Savior with superpowers,” he says. “He travels from another world.
“When he shows up, he erases my past, present, and future mess‑ups—all of them.
“As long as I believe he’s coming and accept him when he takes over Earth.”
Abby exhales.
Relief floods her face.
“I’ve heard that,” she says. “Love that part. What about… after that?”
Rev shrugs.
“Teens don’t want fine print,” he says. “They can barely plan next month.
“They’ll find out the rest when they get there.”
Evan snorts softly.
“So they’re trusting a cosmic dictator to feed and house them forever,” he says. “No training. No mastery. Just a permanent welfare state.”
Rev doesn’t blink.
“How can they plan an afterlife vacation,” he says mildly, “when they won’t even plan for finals?”
Evelyn sets her drink down.
“Foresight and discernment are skills,” she says. “Worth practicing.
“If you never practice investing wisely now—spiritually or practically—you’re not going to like the bill later.”
She looks at Rev.
“Foolish indulgence creates debt,” she says. “Spiritual debt.
“That has to be cleared before a soul can live in the highest world.
“The poor in virtue, wisdom, and discipline don’t inherit that kingdom.
“Healthy, wealthy, wise, virtuous souls do.
“Wealthy in soul. Not just cash.”
Abby shifts, uncomfortable.
She prefers forgiveness without requirements.
Rev logs the words.
Then quietly moves them to a folder labeled “Later.”
Gathering a crowd around his lunch table, Rev promotes the outer realms as a custom pseudo-Heaven where souls can avoid the strict requirements of the Creator's core. A ring of students forms around Rev at lunch a few days later.
He didn’t call them.
They … show up.
“The Creator’s Heaven is maxed out,” he says. “Packed with souls who passed all the hardest tests.”
Murmurs.
“He doesn’t need more statues,” Rev continues. “So He opened new territories—outer realms.
“Places outside the core.
“That’s where we come in.
“New neighborhoods, less strict. More room for custom expectations.”
He leans in.
“You pre‑create whatever you want there,” he says. “Pseudo‑Heaven. Same comfort. Less pressure.”
Evan narrows his eyes.
He recognizes the signature of Outer Realms energy.
“I thought ‘outer darkness’ was Hell,” he says. “You’re rebranding it as Airbnb Heaven.”
Diesel grins from the pillar.
“Maybe it’s dark now,” he says, “but with enough creative lighting, who cares? Certified beliefs can remodel anything.”
“It still sounds like Hell,” Evan mutters.
Diesel shrugs.
“Abby was told if she doesn’t believe something specific, she doesn’t get into Heaven,” he says. “So you have to pick. Non‑believers can construct their own sets, but only I certify them.
“Abby has a hundred Bible versions. Free will means she can believe whatever fits.”
Abby clutches her planner.
The responsibility of choosing terrifies her.
“You’re pushing teens to make adult‑level spiritual decisions,” she protests. “We’re not ready.
“That’s why God gave us interpreters. Preachers. Leaders. Tell us what’s true. We … say yes.”
Diesel’s eyes flash with a new idea.
“Certified Interpreters,” he murmurs. “Premium tier.”
Across the room, Evelyn feels the split deepen.
Starred vs unstarred.
Certified vs uncertified.
Two herds.
Same cliff. Different edges.
As the student body fractures into opposing groups, Diesel uses masks and monthly meetings to reinforce fake beliefs and protect his clients from reality. By winter, the social map is brutal.
A cluster of bare‑forehead students claims their own zone.
“We refuse certification,” they say. “We’re not letting illusions infect our minds.”
Across the hall, the Starred glare back.
“We refuse to mix with pure‑bloods,” they reply. “Their obsession with ‘reality’ could weaken our faith.”
Shoves.
Arguments.
Sometimes worse.
Every time a fight breaks out, the Principal sides with the Starred.
His own forehead glittered.
“To keep certifications strong,” Diesel explains to Rev later, “clients attend a monthly booster meeting.
“Fresh injection of fantasy. Without it, belief potency drops.”
He pulls out a bag of masks.
Each is printed with a gold star.
“We give them these during meetings,” he says. “Visual reinforcement.
“Symbolic protection against ‘contamination’ from the Pure‑bloods.”
Rev frowns.
“My dad did real research on masks,” he says. “Proved they don’t do much.”
Diesel waves that away.
“Doesn’t matter if they work physically,” he says. “Our clients believe they do.
“And belief is the only thing we’re actually selling.”
He hands Rev a flyer.
“Starter questions for designing your afterlife package,” he says.
Rev skims the list:
What do I think I must do to ‘qualify’—be goodish, believe something, fight, learn, be forgiven?
What must I avoid—addictions, perversions, sins, shame, Tempters?
What does my Heaven look like—mansions, forests, clouds, malls?
What skills and powers do I imagine I’ll bring—erased flaws or mastered virtues?
What will I do there—party, work, rest, worship, rule?
What is my status—slave, guest, citizen, leader, co‑creator?
Who’s with me—family, friends, pets, new souls?
What feelings remain—everything, or only ‘positive’ ones?
How does my mind work—instant manifestation, limited creativity, total control?
Do I still have free will, or is everything pre‑scripted forever?
Rev folds the paper slowly.
Blueprint or trap?
Maybe both.
Arguing near the science wing, Diesel certifies evolved modern morality while Evan defends constant virtues against the trend of calling selfishness a holy identity. One afternoon, Diesel corners Evan and Evelyn near the science wing.
“New product,” he says. “Custom morals and virtues.
“I certify those now, too.”
Evan raises an eyebrow.
“I thought virtues were fixed,” he says. “Honesty. Courage. Kindness. Self‑control.
“You don’t just rebrand vice as virtue because it’s easier.”
“Wrong,” Diesel says. “Everything is flexible now.
“Modern morality is evolving.
“Old values are too rigid. The new ones are more inclusive.
“You can’t call someone ‘dishonest’ for making up their own Truth.
“You can’t call a diagnosed schizophrenic ‘delusional.’
“Teen girls can declare themselves ‘re‑virginized.’ Boom. New virtue.
“Language updates. Ethics upgrade.”
Evan feels a flash of anger.
“Virtues have been constant for ages,” he says. “Discipline, justice, compassion, integrity.
“Slapping ‘evolved’ on selfishness doesn’t make it righteous.”
“The old virtue of self‑control,” Diesel says, “got overwritten.
“Now, the highest virtue is self‑expression. Being ‘true to yourself.’
“That means expressing every desire, not filtering them.
“Pride used to be a sin.
“Now it’s an identity.”
Evelyn shakes her head.
“Words change,” she says. “Reality doesn’t.”
Diesel crosses his arms.
“Science backs alternative lifestyles now,” he says. “Old morality was just propaganda. People want proof that their choices are good. I provide it.”
Evan meets his eyes.
“Morality is spiraling down,” he says. “Some people call it ‘virtuous’ to constantly talk about their weaknesses so they don’t have to change.
“‘That’s just who I am’ turns flaws into holy identity.
“Others say it’s moral to rigidly cling to every preference and call them sacred.
“Stoners claim it’s virtuous to stay high because they’re ‘chill’ and ‘not hurting anyone’ while their brains quietly rot.”
“Modern morality is upgrading,” Diesel insists. “Not rotting. People get to be themselves now. Who are you to say their Truth is wrong?”
“I’m not attacking people,” Evan says. “I’m attacking lies that hurt their souls.
“There’s a difference.”
Abby appears at the edge of the group, gripping her prayer journal.
“Our beliefs define us,” she says softly. “People died defending them.
“We can’t just say everyone’s right.”
Evan looks around.
“I’m amazed,” he says, “how sure everyone is that they’re right and everyone else is wrong—while almost nobody digs deep enough to find actual Truth.
“Doubt is illegal in most groups.
“Questioning the belief is the only real sin.”
Surrounded by peers arguing over personal truths, Evan explains the Crystic Conscience while Abby defends blind faith in a Savior who bends the rules for the majority. Rev leans against a locker.
“Whatever works best for me is my Truth,” he says. “Right and wrong depend on context.
“People should live however they want—as long as no one stops anyone else from doing the same.”
Diesel nods.
“To be fulfilled,” he says, “you chase your desires without obsessing over where they come from.
“As long as your beliefs don’t cause obvious external damage, they’re fair game.”
“Freedom of religion,” Evan says, “doesn’t mean a right to force everyone else to affirm your illusions.
“Freedom of speech doesn’t mean lying without consequence.”
“Beliefs are the real power,” Diesel says. “They create results.
“If you could get one belief certified, what would it be?”
Evan doesn’t even hesitate.
“I’d certify this,” he says. “That my Crystic Conscience—my inner divine core—is superior to my ego.
“And that I choose to fully merge with it.”
Rev shrugs.
“I’d certify that I exist somehow after death,” he says. “As data.
“A compressed video file of everything I experienced.”
Abby smiles dreamily.
“I believe in instant, complete forgiveness,” she says. “All the good I do counts.
“All the bad disappears the second I say, ‘I’m sorry.’”
Evan winces.
“That’s not how law works,” he says. “You can’t erase consequences by declaring them gone.
“Why won’t you aim for knowing your Creator’s Truth instead of inventing a softer one?”
Abby pats his arm.
“Listen,” she says. “My Creator made universes in six days.
“He made billions of kids.
“He wants them happy.
“So they pray. They ask.
“He delivers.
“He wrote the laws—so He can bend them whenever He wants.”
“That’s not—” Evan starts.
She barrels on.
“We’re made in His image,” she says. “So if enough of us want something, He listens.
“One kid praying is weak.
“A million praying for the same thing? That’s power.
“My team’s Truth works.
“For us.”
Diesel grins.
“Perfect,” he says. “Let’s get that certified.”
Evelyn steps forward.
“Much of what Diesel says has fragments of truth,” she says. “Your desires and beliefs do shape your temporary afterworld.
“But if they don’t align with real law, they just delay your mission.
“For a very, very long time.”
For once, even Diesel is quiet.
Not convinced.
But not ready to joke.
With the afternoon sun filling the room, Evelyn explains the Celestial Sanctuary and Inner Realm core requirements, revealing that most people's Heaven is just a temporary vacation. Golden light slants through the classroom windows.
Evan stands with his hands on the sill, watching the trees shift in the wind.
He thinks about the promise he made with Evelyn:
To graduate.
To help others graduate.
To not get stuck in the loops.
He turns back to the room.
“Everything you create with mystic energy shows up somewhere,” he says. “Thoughts, feelings, visualizations—they crystallize. Turn into magnets. Pull you toward a matching world after death.”
Diesel whistles softly.
“Wow,” he says. “We do agree on something.”
Evelyn nods.
“The twist,” she says, “is where those creations land.
“If your beliefs line up with the Creator’s Truth, they’re allowed into the Inner Realm—the core.
“If they don’t, they manifest outside.
“In outer worlds.
“There are at least six.”
Diesel brightens.
“So it’s like a football game,” he says. “Some get into the stadium. Others watch from the parking lot or a bar. Same game. Different angles.”
Abby hugs her prayer journal.
“I plan to kneel right next to my Savior,” she says. “In His radiance.”
Rev frowns.
“Doesn’t that… incinerate you?” he asks. “That much light? Anything not absolutely perfect would burn away.”
Evan nods.
“The true core is absolute,” he says. “But there’s also a place outside the castle walls—call it the Celestial Sanctuary.
“It’s real.
“It’s beautiful.
“It’s not the final destination.
“But it feels like Heaven to a lot of souls.”
Rev perks up.
“That’s where I want to go,” he says. “For a long time.
“Race cars.
“Movie star life.
“Gold mines.
“Rooms full of stuff I never had.
“Piano lessons. Art studios. Maybe even…” he mumbles, “…finish my Barbie collection.”
He grimaces.
“Forget that last part.”
Evelyn laughs softly.
“Most people’s ‘Heaven’ is actually Sanctuary,” she says. “A long, gentle vacation.
“Healing.
“Learning.
“Fulfilling stuck desires.
“But those souls haven’t mastered deep self‑discipline, wisdom, virtues, and mystic powers.
“They’re not ready for the core.
“Self‑centered desires still pull on them.”
“In the core,” she adds, “every thought and feeling becomes permanent.
“No room for casual fantasy.
“In Sanctuary, thoughts create temporary illusions.
“Souls often think they’re in Heaven because they can do almost anything they want—as long as it doesn’t violate cosmic law.
“They can stay there for thousands of years.
“Replaying what they missed.”
Diesel shrugs.
“I already prefer watching games on TV,” he says. “No lines. No weather. No drunk fans.
“Remote Heaven works for me.”
“I don’t have to earn a ticket,” Abby says. “My Savior hands them out to anyone who believes.
“That’s the easy way.”
Rev stares at his hands.
“I guess we’ll find out when we get there,” he says quietly.
“If we’re wrong… there’s no patch update.”
Abby smiles.
“That’s the magic of blind faith,” she says. “I don’t have to think past my expectations.
“If enough of us want the same thing, my Creator will make it right.”
Evan exhales.
“Sanctuary isn’t the end,” he reminds them. “It’s a hospital.
“A classroom.
“Then souls come back here to finish what they started.
“To earn a real graduation.”
Diesel grins.
“Sounds like permanent vacation with optional homework,” he says. “Why would anyone leave?”
Countering the desire for an eternal easy break, Evan describes the spiritual warrior requirements for graduating to the core, emphasizing that souls must surrender ego and selfish desires. “The Creator doesn’t force you out of Sanctuary,” Evan says.
“You can stall there as long as you want.
“But eventually, something deeper in you wakes up.
“A homesickness.
“A pull toward the core.
“That’s when evolution calls you back.”
Rev leans forward.
“These Sanctuary souls,” he says. “They’re not ‘evil.’ Why bar them from the core?”
“Because graduating to the core has strict requirements,” Evan says. “Souls must surrender selfish desires. Ego. Align free will with the Creator’s will.
“Serve others—selflessly and repeatedly.
“They must become mystic warriors—wise, disciplined, powerful—for the right reasons.
“And those skills are forged in bodies.
“Here.”
Diesel grimaces.
“Ouch,” he says. “Pathway to sainthood.
“Hard pass.
“I bet Sanctuary’s full. Core? Mostly empty.”
Rev nods slowly.
“Being on vacation forever isn’t success,” he admits. “It’s… stalling.
“Nice stalling. But still stalling.”
“Everyone loves breaks,” Evan says. “But real joy comes from mission.
“From being a spiritual warrior.
“From fighting for something bigger than yourself.”
Abby crosses her arms.
“My Creator doesn’t need warriors,” she says. “He can do everything himself.
“I don’t like ‘battle’ language.
“I just want to be peaceful. Love people. Be… goodish.”
“Being a warrior doesn’t mean swinging swords at humans,” Evan says. “It means having enemies—and not letting them rule you from the inside or the outside.”
“My blind faith protects me,” Abby insists. “End of story.”
“Lots of people believe that,” Evan says. “And still get wrecked by enemies they never recognized.
“When you refuse to see them, you help them.
“Look at the world.
“Look how many have aligned with darkness without even knowing.”
Abby’s jaw tightens.
“I want life to be simple,” she says. “Easy. No missions. No requirements. No bad guys.
“That’s my Truth.”
“Pretending the exam doesn’t exist doesn’t cancel it,” Evan says. “People who replace reality with blind belief don’t escape consequences.
“They delay them.
“And then they come back here to repeat the same grade.”
Rev lifts his head.
“You’ve described three paths,” he says. “Reincarnation, Sanctuary, core.
“That’s three of seven.
“What about the other four?”
Evan glances at Evelyn.
She nods once.
Time to open the rest of the file.
Laying out the remaining cosmic options, Evan details Ghost World, Outer Darkness, and mystic frequencies to warn his classmates about where their earthly habits will trap them. “First,” Evan says, “there’s Ghost World.”
The air seems to lose a degree.
“Some souls die,” he explains, “but refuse to move on.
“Addictions. Attachments. Grudges. Trauma. Unfinished business.
“They cling to the physical world.
“That creates a ghost‑layer—a parallel version of Earth.
“They haunt the people and places they won’t release.”
Rev’s curiosity spikes.
“Both Sanctuary and Ghost World deal with unfinished desires,” he says. “What’s the difference?”
“Sanctuary is where you fulfill pure desires,” Evan replies. “Like wanting to learn piano.
“Ghost World is where you haunt the bar where you used to play.
“Sanctuary gives you space to grow.
“Ghost World chains you to specific people, objects and obsessions.
“Ghosts feed off living humans’ addictions and emotions.
“There are no addicts in Sanctuary to hook into.”
Diesel folds his arms.
“Desires and addictions live in the brain,” he says. “When the brain dies, so do they. End of story.”
Evelyn shakes her head.
“If your whole consciousness dissolves, yes,” she says. “Otherwise, what you’ve built into your soul stays.
“Attachments don’t vanish because your body does.”
Abby smiles faintly.
“My Creator will take away all my attachments and unfulfilled desires,” she says. “I already booked full forgiveness and a makeover.”
“Then you lose everything,” Evelyn says gently. “Memories. Thoughts. Feelings. Beliefs.
“Wiped.
“Is that really what you want?”
Rev’s brow furrows.
“Do those attachments reappear in the next life?” he asks.
“Sort of,” Evelyn says. “What you don’t resolve leaks back in after about age twelve.
“Same patterns.
“New body.”
“Fourth option,” Evan says. “Outer Darkness.
“A realm where unvirtuous fantasies become real.
“Demons, monsters, criminal souls who constantly break cosmic law.
“Hell‑world.
“People build it themselves with repeated thoughts and actions.”
Abby makes a face.
“My Creator sends disobedient non‑believers to Hell forever,” she says. “Eternal torture unless He randomly chooses to forgive them.
“No one escapes.
“No parole.”
“That’s not justice,” Evelyn says. “That’s bad theology.
“People pre‑create their darklands unconsciously.
“They spend their lives in bars, casinos and toxic situations.
“They’re building matching homes there.
“It’s not ‘sentencing.’ It’s sowing and reaping.
“They can eventually leave.
“But most don’t want to.
“Not for a long time.”
Diesel shrugs.
“If life’s a dream,” he says, “might as well enjoy it. Here or there.”
“Because indulgent dreams delay your mission,” Evelyn says. “Imagine repeating first grade for centuries.
“Eventually, your soul matures enough to hate it.
“But you’re stuck.
“Cosmic cycles open and close.
“Refusing to grow when the door is open can mean missing your shot.
“And the soul will regret that.”
Evan inhales.
“Let’s pretend,” he says, “that of everyone who dies today:
• 25% dissolve—no more cohesion to hold them together.
• 25% land in Outer Darkness.
• 25% in Ghost World.
• 25% in Sanctuary.
“Maybe—maybe—one in a billion reaches the core.”
Diesel winces.
“That first category?” he says. “That’s what I expect for myself.
“But I do not appreciate being called ‘wasted consciousness.’”
“Fine,” Evan says. “Try ‘unredeemable, weak, atrophied, or lacking cosmic glue.’”
“I could have you arrested,” Diesel mutters.
“Each soul has an antenna,” Evan goes on. “A mystic receiver.
“You can tune it to divine beings, Sanctuary souls, ghosts, monsters, or your own Crystic Conscience.
“Or to demons pretending to be light.
“That’s how mediums, psychics, and dark magicians contact spirits—by tuning in.”
Rev leans in.
“How do they get away with it?” he asks. “Isn’t that insanely dangerous?”
“Very,” Evan says. “That’s why Soul School trains students to recognize frequency.
Music, symbols, colors.
“Rock, hard jazz, deep blues—often match Ghost and Darkness vibes.
“Classical, truly uplifting music—matches core and Sanctuary.
“Dark tattoos, skulls, snakes, pervy symbols—more lower‑realm flags.
“Most current movies? Crime, violence, perversions. They help souls pre‑order low‑realm homes.”
Diesel laughs.
“Picture a teen party with classical music, organic salad, and pastel clothes,” he says. “Only you would show up.”
Abby smiles faintly.
“My Savior’s favorite color is blood red,” she says.
Rev sighs.
“There has to be a middle path,” he says. “Most people won’t choose hardcore sainthood or warrior mode.
“If you don’t soften your message, no one listens.
“Teens only care about now—boyfriends, grades, food. Not the afterlife.
“You should compromise. Accept more beliefs. You’d have more friends.”
Evan straightens.
His eyes glow with a quiet fire.
“Watered‑down Truth doesn’t wake anyone up,” he says. “Pretending consequences don’t exist doesn’t erase them.
“Addictions and attachments will glue a soul to Ghost World.
“Lack of self‑control will buy a Darklands vacation.
“That’s just law.”
He looks at each of them.
“My best friends already graduated,” he says softly. “They walk the core.
“I plan to join them.
“I’m not betraying that for easy mode.”
The bell rings.
The hallway fills again.
Gold stars flash.
Bare foreheads pass.
Most have no idea an afterlife war is raging for their souls.
But Evan does.
And he knows this was only the opening round.
During an after-school club meeting, Evan presents a flier titled "Afterlife Options" to his classmates—Diesel, Abby, and Rev—urging them to realize that a million-year eternity requires much more planning than a thirty-year retirement. While Diesel assumes he will simply vanish into nothingness and Abby clings to an absolute, grace-based salvation where an external Savior pays all debts, Evan introduces the fundamental three paths of the soul: Dissolve, Revolve, or Evolve. He explains that souls who fail to store virtuous energy disintegrate ("Dissolve"), while revolving souls remain trapped on the wheel of karma in "karmic school" until they actively choose "soul school" to master Holy Spirit energy. The debate highlights the economic framework of choices (get, have, and spend akin to Spenders, Borrowers, Lenders, and Savers) and challenges the illusion of proxy salvation.
The Three Afterlife Paths (Dissolve, Revolve, Evolve): Souls face three ultimate trajectories upon death: disintegration into cosmic dust due to a lack of virtuous energy ("Dissolve"), returning to physical re-embodiment to continue learning in karmic school ("Revolve"), or graduating into full-time existence in the mystic world through spiritual mastery ("Evolve").
The Trap of Karmic Default: Every human is automatically enrolled in an afterlife-training school while alive; failing to actively choose "soul school" defaults the individual into the "school of karmic hard knocks" or "fake school," repeating cycles for thousands of years.
Energy as Currency (Get, Have, Spend): Mystic energy flows in three stages analogous to money, requiring souls to generate a steady incoming flow of clean Holy Spirit light through discipline and wise choices rather than expecting unearned handouts.
The Fallacy of Proxy Salvation: Relying entirely on an external Savior to eternally carry unwashed karmic debt without personal transmutation or spiritual labor leaves a soul's energy imprisoned and unprepared for a higher, perfect realm.
Evan: The club leader and discussion guide who introduces the afterlife fliers, defines the three soul paths, and challenges his peers to think beyond conventional religious dogmas.
Diesel: A skeptical classmate who initially claims he will simply vanish into nothingness and resists the idea of spiritual accountability or afterlife planning.
Abby: A student clinging to traditional, grace-based beliefs about an instant afterlife ticket and a Savior who carries all karmic debts without requiring personal soul schooling.
Rev: An analytical classmate who explores the logic of reincarnation, soul schooling, and the mechanics of spiritual energy flow.